From 24be70a80b52de0cf0dd2b786c508e1294486e26 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Robert Fry Date: Wed, 25 Mar 2026 13:59:24 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] rewording --- deckhand.tex | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/deckhand.tex b/deckhand.tex index a3afdfb..7c29d40 100644 --- a/deckhand.tex +++ b/deckhand.tex @@ -64,11 +64,11 @@ { \setlength{\parskip}{0.5\baselineskip} - An RYA Sailing Instructor with three years experience leading safe and fun sailing lessons, and operating safety boats. + I'm an RYA Sailing Instructor with three years experience leading safe and fun dinghy sailing lessons while driving safety boats. With a lifelong history of sailing a 29ft Westerly Merlin in The Solent, including solo passages and club races, I've developed my seamanship skills. - I became determined to pursue a hands-on maritime career when asked by Sussex University Sailing Club to be their sole skipper, chartering a 44ft Sun Odyssey 439 in Greece. + I became determined to pursue a hands-on maritime career when approached by Sussex University Sailing Club to be their sole skipper, chartering a 44ft Sun Odyssey 439 in Greece. - Previously employed as a Software Engineer, I developed a strong attention to detail, backed up by a Master of Mathematics (MMath, distinction). + Previously employed as a Software Engineer, I developed a strong attention to detail and problem solving skills, backed up by a Master of Mathematics (MMath, distinction). Outside of working, I enjoy racing my RS 700 in Chichester Harbour, exploring the local historical sites, and evening cooking. }