diff --git a/deckhand.tex b/deckhand.tex
index 48ce854..b9c994c 100644
--- a/deckhand.tex
+++ b/deckhand.tex
@@ -110,15 +110,16 @@
     ]
 
     \begin{itemize}
-        \item Three years dedicating my expertise every weekend as a Dinghy Instructor for the Emsworth Slipper Sailing Club, teaching all ages and abilities up to RYA Stage 4 and racing in conditions up to moderate F4.
-        \item Took initiative with asset maintenance and proactive safety.
+        \item Three years dedicating every weekend as a Dinghy Instructor for the Emsworth Slipper Sailing Club.
+        \item Taught all ages and abilities, from novice up to RYA Stage 4 and racing in conditions up to moderate F4.
+        \item Took initiative with asset maintenance and proactive safety (e.g. foam boom padding, line replacement).
     \end{itemize}
 
     \ResumeHistory{Sailing in The Solent}
 
     \begin{itemize}
-        \item Extensive experience sailing a Westerly Merlin in The Solent, logging 630{\footnotesize NM} and 8 night hours last year, including solo passages and inter-club racing.
-        \item Practical experience with off-season maintenance, including \emph{woodworking}, \emph{varnishing}, \emph{painting}, \emph{antifouling}, \emph{copper coating}, \emph{mast lifting}, and \textcolor{orange}{\emph{crowd control}}.
+        \item Extensive experience sailing a 29ft Westerly Merlin in The Solent, logging 630{\footnotesize NM} and 8 night hours last year, including solo passages and inter-club racing.
+        \item Practical experience with off-season maintenance, including \emph{woodworking}, \emph{varnishing}, \emph{painting}, \emph{antifouling}, \emph{copper coating}, \emph{mast lifting}, and \textcolor{orange}{spectator \emph{crowd control}}.
     \end{itemize}
 
     \ResumeHistory{Sole Charter Skipper}
@@ -148,7 +149,9 @@
     ]
 
     \begin{itemize}
-        \item Twice voted committee member and a director of the Emsworth Slipper Sailing Club Ltd, demonstrating my responsibility and commitment to the local sailing community.
+        \item Twice voted as committee member and director of the Emsworth Slipper Sailing Club Ltd.
+        % demonstrating my responsibility and commitment to the local sailing community.
+        \item Responsible for sailing sub-committee minute taking, and an additional point of contact for members.
     \end{itemize}
 
     \ResumeSection{Skills}