rewording and bae reference

deckhand.tex

@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
             antifouling,
             copper coating,
             fibreglass repairs,
-            woodworking,
+            %woodworking,
             and general upkeep.
 
         % How am I interesting?
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
         that will
             give hands-on industry experience,
         where I can
-            achieve the Yachtmaster Offshore exam
+            achieve the Yachtmaster Offshore qualification
             and a commercial certification.
     }
 
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@
             \item Line Handling
             \item Anchoring \& Mooring
             \item Passage \& Pilotage
-            \item Woodworking
+            % \item Woodworking
             \item Varnishing
             \item Antifouling
             \item Copper Coating
@@ -209,6 +209,8 @@
 
     \end{itemize}
 
+\pagebreak
+
     \ResumeHistory{Sole Charter Skipper}
     [
         start={Jun 2024},
@@ -217,14 +219,12 @@
 
     \begin{itemize}
 
-        \item Sole skipper for Sussex University Sailing Club, chartering a 44ft Sun Odyssey 439 in Athena, Greece.
+        \item Sole skipper for Sussex University Sailing Club, chartering a 44ft Sun Odyssey 439 in Athens, Greece.
 
         \item Responsible for daily yacht handling, guest safety, mooring, anchoring, passage, and pilotage.
 
     \end{itemize}
 
-\pagebreak
-
     \ResumeHistory{RS 700 Racing}
     [
         start={Jan 2023},
@@ -262,13 +262,15 @@
 
     \begin{itemize}
 
-        \item Developed real-time navigation and combat management systems for the Royal Navy, contributing to the £285m RECODE modernisation contract for both surface and subsurface platforms.
+        \item Developed real-time navigation and combat management systems for the Royal Navy, contributing to the £285m RECODE modernisation contract for surface platforms.
+
+        \item Developed test and simulation software for subsurface platforms, used in sea trials and personnel training.
 
         \item Mentored a graduate engineer with no C++ background, ensuring project standards where met on time.
 
-        \item Proposed and implemented efficient algorithms and data structures to meet requirements, including geospatial indexing and deterministic scheduling for scalable distributed Kubernetes-based systems.
+        % \item Proposed and implemented efficient algorithms and data structures to meet requirements, including geospatial indexing and deterministic scheduling for scalable distributed Kubernetes-based systems.
 
-        \item Applied Model-Based Software Engineering (UML and SysML under the NATO Architecture Framework v4).
+        % \item Applied Model-Based Software Engineering (UML and SysML under the NATO Architecture Framework v4).
 
     \end{itemize}
 
@@ -300,7 +302,7 @@
 
         \item Developed robust techniques for Windows system maintenance, including virus removal, system speedup.
 
-        \item Performed hardware repairs on Apple devices, desktops, and laptop computers.
+        \item Performed hardware repairs and upgrades on desktops, laptops, and Apple devices.
 
         \item Provided friendly advice when advising customers, often needing a tailored description of faults.
 
@@ -325,17 +327,20 @@
     \ResumeSection{Hobbies}
 
     \begin{itemize}
-        \item Racing my RS 700 on weekends in Chichester Harbour.
-        \item Watching SailGP, after seeing it live in Portsmouth 2025.
-        \item Walking and exploring local historical sites, having visited almost every National Heritage site in Hampshire.
-        \item Cooking at home, especially over Christmas when I cook dinner for family.
+
+        \item Racing my RS 700 in Chichester Harbour, and watching SailGP after seeing it live in Portsmouth 2025.
+
+        \item Walking and exploring the local historical sites, having visited almost every Natural Heritage site in Hampshire.
+
+        \item Skiing in early January in the Alps, especially over quieter slopes that are usually steep or icy.
+
+        \item Cooking at home, especially over Christmas when I cook for 12 friends and family.
+
     \end{itemize}
 
     \ResumeSection{Referees}
 
-    % use paracol because emma's email is too long
-    \columnratio{0.39,0.30,0.30}
-    \begin{paracol}{3}
+    \begin{multicols}{2}
 
         \ResumeReferee[
             name={Emma Robertson},
@@ -343,15 +348,13 @@
             phone={+44 7748 644481},
             email={rc.sailing@emsworthslippersc.org.uk},
         ]
-        \switchcolumn
 
         \ResumeReferee[
             name={Austin Eszcori},
-            position={Chief Officer, M/Y Metsuyan IV},
+            position={Chief Officer, Mousea},
             phone={+44 7500 700371},
-            email={austinezcori@gmail.com},
+            email={chiefofficer@yachtmousea.com},
         ]
-        \switchcolumn
 
         \ResumeReferee[
             name={Matt Stevens},
@@ -359,8 +362,14 @@
             phone={+44 1243 887757},
             email={matt@emscom.co.uk},
         ]
-        \switchcolumn
 
-    \end{paracol}
+        \ResumeReferee[
+            name={Blair Butterworth},
+            position={Engineering Lead, BAE Systems},
+            phone={+44 7515 661300},
+            email={butterworth.blair@baesystems.com}
+        ]
+
+    \end{multicols}
 
 \end{document}